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Learning How To Fly Epilogue

The End



Jack O’Neill was tired. Granted the week wasn’t as bad as it could have been, but still, Stargate Command was never easy. When he opened his fridge for a beer, even though he knew that he hadn’t bought any for a while, he was surprised to see the fridge full.

“Bribery, Winchester?” he called out.

John Winchester stepped out of the shadows. He looked like hell too.

“You’re not welcome here,” Jack reminded him.

“I just,” Winchester faltered. “I just need to hear that my boys are good.”

“What happened to you,” Jack challenged.

“Demon,” he said succinctly. “Following around Sam’s girl. They’re still interested in my boy for some reason.”

Sounded like Winchester had had a ‘Stargate Command’ week. Jack went back into the fridge and pulled out a six-pack of beers. He set them on the table and sat down. John joined him. “My boys,” he asked again.

“You’re boys are good. I assume you know that Sam’s home now?”

John nodded once. Jack took a sip of beer and remembered that while the parental bird did kick the baby out of the nest, it wasn’t because he didn’t love his offspring.



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May. 21st, 2010 03:20 am (UTC)
I really enjoyed this story. I love smart!Dean stories. And I really enjoyed how you interwined him with the Stargate universe. I gotta say, I'd love to see more of this universe.

This one is definitely a keeper!
May. 22nd, 2010 06:19 pm (UTC)
just posted a couple snippets in the same universe, but much shorter.
May. 21st, 2010 03:25 am (UTC)
This was excellent - the characters, the storyline - everything was fun and interesting and I loved the way you twined the 'verses together :D Awesome!
May. 22nd, 2010 06:19 pm (UTC)
May. 21st, 2010 05:39 am (UTC)
This was just so ...
FABULOUS! Truly, I enjoyed this x-over more than any other in recent memory. Smart!Dean is so very cool and when you plonk him down in Atlantis - well. That right there is a situation just made of win! Quick geek note tho: chapter 8 has a lot of italic script which I think shouldn't be there? Very annoying to read! Again, thanks for a great afternoon's read.

May. 21st, 2010 05:40 am (UTC)
Re: This was just so ...
ETA: I really, *really* hope you are planning on more stories in this 'verse?

Re: This was just so ... - faithburke - May. 22nd, 2010 06:21 pm (UTC) - Expand
May. 21st, 2010 06:15 am (UTC)
Wow, what a ride *g*! I love the meshing of both shows and smart!Dean is such a delight to read :D. I find this a really enjoyable read even though I do not read gen fics all that much.
May. 22nd, 2010 06:21 pm (UTC)
grin. glad that you enjoyed it even if it is not your preferred genre.
May. 21st, 2010 09:01 am (UTC)
ohhh yay! Thank you for answering the question about the demon, I'm glad that John was there to protect jessica. Also glad to see that Jack is there to protect Dean. Like I said before this was fanastic and yeah I could ramble for hours but I won't since sleep would be a good idea.

Rock on and I hope to see more writing soon!
May. 22nd, 2010 06:26 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you enjoyed this story so much. I went through periods of hating it. I'm trying to write but my beta (the faith half of this lj) is as flighty as my muse. Still, I just posted a couple snippets that I had to take out of the big story since they didn't fit the plot.
(no subject) - amanofmydreams - May. 24th, 2010 06:26 pm (UTC) - Expand
(no subject) - faithburke - Oct. 7th, 2010 12:34 am (UTC) - Expand
May. 22nd, 2010 06:05 am (UTC)
Awesome crossover.
May. 22nd, 2010 06:27 pm (UTC)
thank you
May. 22nd, 2010 12:29 pm (UTC)
I found this story as I selected at delicious after smart!Dean story's.I love them and this is one of the best I ever read. I really hope you will do more in this `verse and I am happy that you let Jess live. The last sentence was heartbreaking =>John nodded once. Jack took a sip of beer and remembered that while the parental bird did kick the baby out of the nest, it wasn’t because he didn’t love his offspring.
Oct. 7th, 2010 12:35 am (UTC)
Thank you. I have a soft spot for Smart!Dean.
May. 22nd, 2010 12:45 pm (UTC)
This was a fantastic story!!!! I love how well you meshed the universes together and I sincerely hope to see more in this verse. You crafted a great plot and believable character interactions. WELL DONE!
May. 22nd, 2010 06:23 pm (UTC)
right now I just have posted some snippets that didn't fit into the actual plot and so they are posted as snippets in the same universe.
Thank you for the great compliment.
May. 22nd, 2010 02:44 pm (UTC)
This story was awesome. I love stories that showcase how smart and creative Dean is. This story also had explosions, puddle jumper races, and wonderful banter between the characters.

On a small note, there was one discrepancy. In chapter one, you mentioned Dean's fight with Ronon lasted ten minutes, and then in chapter two you said it lasted over an hour. Also in chapter two, you spelled Led Zeppelin wrong.

Anyway, like I said before, I loved this story. It was definitely one of the best crossovers posted this year. :)
May. 22nd, 2010 06:17 pm (UTC)
Fixed the spelling error. O and there were two different fights. One, Dean lost on purpose and the other he lost b/c Ronon is just better.

Thanks for the review.
May. 23rd, 2010 07:44 pm (UTC)
Seriously fun. Loved jealous Atlantis
Oct. 7th, 2010 12:37 am (UTC)
thank you. now I'm trying to figure out how to write a couple more snippets with jealous Atlantis.
(no subject) - plratty - Oct. 7th, 2010 06:48 pm (UTC) - Expand
Aug. 20th, 2010 06:21 am (UTC)
This was great. :) Are you planning a sequel?
Oct. 7th, 2010 12:38 am (UTC)
No. Or at least nothing nearly as long as this. I'm glad you liked it though.
Sep. 30th, 2010 02:26 am (UTC)
I've spent the last two days reading this story. It didn't take me two days to read it - I read it once through yesterday and came back again for another read through today. I'll probably read it again within the next couple of weeks. It is that good.

An excellent fusion of the two fandoms, very well written, and loved the Smart!Dean. I didn't know that was a fic genre - I'm gonna have to do some more searching now. :) Thanks for the story!
Oct. 7th, 2010 12:39 am (UTC)
Thank you. I'm glad that it was a story that you finish and then read again. If you ever want a couple suggestions for smart!Dean, just ask. There's a MacGuyver crossover (Turn it Up to Eleven) that is AWESOME.
(no subject) - mims_oh - Oct. 8th, 2010 12:28 am (UTC) - Expand
Oct. 6th, 2010 08:06 am (UTC)
wow, I dont watch stargate, I think I might have to I stayed up till 4 to read the whole story at once instead of sleeping and I have every intention of looking of a sequal because this DESERVES one! I loved it! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
Oct. 7th, 2010 12:40 am (UTC)
grin. i'm glad you liked this so much. I doubt there will ever be another story in this universe as long as this, but who knows. Thanks again for the review
Jun. 19th, 2011 03:38 pm (UTC)
Amazing story and universe. Loved it.
Jun. 19th, 2011 07:42 pm (UTC)
thank you for the review!
May. 5th, 2012 04:03 am (UTC)
Such a great story. Nice job! I enjoyed it.
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